Rating: 3/5
Review:
Disappointing
I began by liking this character-study/thriller a lot, but it began
to pall quite badly in the second half.
The story is of John
Dyer, an ex-journalist now divorced and living in Oxford where his
son attends the private school where Dyer himself went. The opening
is a slow revelation of Dyer’s circumstances and mental state which
I found very well done. Then, Dyer finds himself in possession of
some potentially world-changing information which a lot of people in
governments and big, powerful international businesses are very keen
to get their hands on. It becomes a sort of espionage novel, with
Dyer’s great moral dilemma about what to do at its heart.
Much of the book is
taken up with Dyer’s life and character, plus that of those around
him – wealthy, rather self-obsessed people, some of whom have
rather sinister backgrounds of one sort or another. The thriller
part is rather less than thrilling a lot of the time, with Dyer being
infuriatingly indecisive and rather pusillanimous in the guise of
weighing up moral matters, and the denouement doesn’t help this.
Also, Nicholas Shakespeare’s style becomes a bit wearisome. He is
a very good writer in many ways, but especially after about half way
I found the prose becoming a little show-offy and mannered.
As an example, every
so often he slips from a normal narrative past-tense to present tense
for a few sentences and then back again, like this:
“He dashed into
the Dragon Cinema, and bought a ticket to a film that had already
begun. He fell asleep after ten minutes, and when he wakes up the
three people in the cinema are leaving. It’s the middle of the day
as he emerges. He has no memory of what he’s watched. He feels in
another time zone, another country. In slow steps, he headed back
towards the town centre, plunged into a canal of images.”
Now, perhaps I just
haven’t studied English Literature to a sufficiently advanced level
to appreciate some subtle emotional intensity in this technique, but
to me it was just extremely irritating – and it got more frequent
and more irritating the longer the book went on. It kept throwing me
out of the narrative, leaving me trying to re-orientate myself and
wrestle with the prose and I eventually got very grumpy about it.
(And “a canal of images”? Seriously?)
There are also
rather over-long episodes seemingly designed to show us how much
Shakespeare knows about academic Oxford, fly-fishing and other
subjects, at least one monumentally convenient coincidence and so on.
I was disappointed
overall. I expected a thoughtful, insightful, well-constructed and
involving book from such a respected author, but I didn’t really
get it in the end and was left feeling that there is less here than
meets the eye. It’s by no means a bad book, but it’s not all
that good either.
(My thanks to
Vintage Publishing for an ARC via NetGalley.)