Rating: 2/5
Review:
Very disappointing
I'm afraid I can't agree with the enthusiastic reviews for
The Two O'Clock Boy. I didn't think it
was very good at all.
The book is a sort of police procedural, in that it involves
a police investigation of a series of murders, but there's precious little
procedure really, and lots of Maverick Cop, This-Time-It's-Personal, Threatened
Investigator stuff. Both central police
officers have Family Issues, one has a Dark Secret In His Past Which Could Ruin
Him…you get the idea. The plot – who
would have thought it? – centres around an abusive children's home in the
1980s, and frankly, it all felt rather unoriginal and well-worn.
The narrative is quite well structured at the start so I
found myself carried along reasonably well for the first couple of hundred
pages. However, lazy cliché marred the
prose too often: "he clung on for dear life", "she dragged them
kicking and screaming", "the life and soul" and plenty of
others, and the occasional solecism added to the sense of slightly careless
writing. It all seemed a bit stale and
crudely done to me; I found that the story became more laboured and the
implausibilities and rather unconvincing "thrills" mounted up. Characters who had earlier been carefully
introduced and given rather pointless little conflicts of their own which added
nothing to the story were apparently forgotten. I lost count of the number of times a phone
rang or something else interrupted *just* as something dreadful was about to
happen…and so on.
The book became a bit of a slog, and then just silly –
including a vicious mass murderer who said things like "I harbour a
lifetime's resentment against your family," at which point I said out loud
"oh, for heavens' sake!" (I paraphrase). I got to the eye-rolling stage as the lead
investigator was taken off the case, wondering whether any cliché was to be
left out, and passed well beyond it as the plot and behaviour of central
characters became simply ridiculous. I
finished the book out of a sense of duty and then wondered why I had bothered
with what became simply ludicrous nonsense.
So, this wasn't for me.
The reasonably good first half meant I gave it two stars rather than
one, but only just. This is the start of
a series, apparently, but it's certainly not a series I shall be bothering
with.
(I received an ARC via Netgalley.)